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Another piece that I worked very hard on. It wasn't as hard of "Legends" but it's about the same status, no?
I saw this like of format idea in several places and it inspired me.
Manual Rainbows is hard to make D8
But I'm so proud of how this turned out :heart:
I know there are a few faults, like charmander's yellow markings and the shape of pikachu's feet. but I really would like critiques on this. and critiques aren't just pointing out the bads but also the goods, remember that.
Sorry about the watermarks, it's self explanatory.

Enjoy~

Art/ *celiex3
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Critiques


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This Picture is nicely colored simply and just wonderfully pastel light colors, To me I can Just simply put. But mostly it's wonderfully Plain and adoriable! :love: and I think Poke'mon will forever be a favorate to me and all poke'mon fans everywhere.I also like how you put all the characters nicely put. I also like the fact that you put Charmander, bulbasaur, and squirtle's backgrounds to the elements they are strongest to! Pikachu Catches my eyes the most, and stands out very Nicely! ;) And Pikachu will Always be in my heart forever and ever!! :heart: heart:

I just can't think anymore.
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I don't think anybody can resist the first generation pkmz. The use of manga-like line separation makes it look very "comic"/cartoon-like? I really like how you used different patterned backgrounds for each starter (especially mixing them up). Nothing much to say about the colors, it's simple, suits the theme, and eye-catchy.

Critiques/suggestions o.o:

Pikachu's feet are fine to me--makes it more mouse-like (ayyaa.. so many "like" this "like" that)--however, I think its raised arm looks a bit off compared to its other arm. Maybe the line-art could be a bit more straighter and sharper? (umh.. I can't even do that myself, so ignore if you wish XD). Bulbasaur's arm with the leaf on it looks kinda bulgy/longer than the front one. I suggest thickening "Pocket Monsters" thing too because the lines look thiner than the rest of the drawing...just saying.

Anyhow, in my opinion, this is one of the many greatest pieces you've ever done. :3 Great jobbie Cx3, dun kill me!
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:iconkiri-kins:
Oh my goodness this is adorable!! <3

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:iconarkeokaze:
Wowwww :D
That's so pretty~ I love it!
The pokemon contrast really well~ >w<
:iconlo-gi-oh:
Go Charmander go! And pikachu too!

Really though, nice inspired design. They're in a good order, the colors balance well, and it's just an over all joy to look at. Very awesome.

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:iconnemo-tv-champion:
That's really good sis, I like the colors!

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"We will meet one day, I'll make sure of it." :heart:

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this is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! even if i could write a critic its clearly impossible to point out the mistakes that you haven't DDD8

10000000000000000000000000/10 x3

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i cried happy tears when my charmeleon evolved into charizard in my first ever pokemon game.
:iconceliex3:
Thank you <3

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"The highest intelligence is caring for others that you will never meet." - *celiex3
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Thanks ^o^

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"The highest intelligence is caring for others that you will never meet." - *celiex3
:iconceliex3:
thankies sis <3

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Cute style, I'd go for the originals too! ^^

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The colors are so soft here, making it such a nice piece to look at :) I love the style of this pic, truely a wonderful pic

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